Words That Matter
Richard Wright on being “caught by the white death”
In Black Boy, a memoir of youth spent in racist terror and poverty in the American South, the African-American novelist Richard Wright recalls learning as a teenager of the murder of a friend’s older brother by whites. In describing his own reaction some twenty years later, Wright provides chilling language to explain the rippling effects of racist violence. We offer an excerpt here in memory of George Floyd, and in solidarity with all who continue to live under the threat of such violence today.
“You’ve heard, haven’t you?” he asked.
“My brother, Bob?”
“No, what happened?”
Ned began to weep softly.
“They killed him,” he managed to say.
“The white folks?” I asked in a whisper, guessing.
He sobbed his answer. Bob was dead; I had met him only a few times, but I felt that I had known him through his brother.
“Th-they t-took him in a c-car … Out on a c-country road … Th-they shot h-him,” Ned whimpered.
I had heard that Bob was working at one of the hotels in town.
“Th-they said he was fooling with a white prostitute there in the hotel,” Ned said.
Inside of me my world crashed and my body felt heavy. I stood looking down the quiet, sun-filled street. Bob had been caught by the white death, the threat of which hung over every male black in the South. I had heard whispered tales of black boys having sex relations with white prostitutes in the hotels in town, but I had never paid any close attention to them; now those tales came home to me in the form of the death of a man I knew.
I did not search for a job that day; I returned home and sat on my porch too, and stared. What I had heard altered the look of the world, induced in me a temporary paralysis of will and impulse. The penalty of death awaited me if I made a false move and I wondered if it was worth-while to make any move at all. The things that influenced my conduct as a Negro did not have to happen to me directly; I needed but to hear of them to feel their full effects in the deepest layers of my consciousness. Indeed, the white brutality that I had not seen was a more effective control of my behavior than that which I knew. The actual experience would have let me see the realistic outlines of what was really happening, but as long as it remained something terrible and yet remote, something whose horror and blood might descend upon me at any moment, I was compelled to give my entire imagination over to it, an act which blocked the springs of thought and feeling in me, creating a sense of distance between me and the world in which I lived.
Richard Wright, Black Boy (1945)
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Why is writing so difficult? There are probably as many reasons as there are authors, but one of the biggest is that it is impossible to write clearly about an idea until you have had it clearly, and that itself can be extraordinarily difficult. Our best and deepest thoughts arrive from a thousand directions and often in surprising moments, and they don’t work very hard to keep themselves in line. Some may even arrive as wordless feelings or intuitions that language seems sorely inadequate to capture. Once we start herding these mental experiences into a reasonable order on the page, new thoughts come along out of nowhere and disrupt the whole business again. In short, even for its best practitioners, writing is usually a messy process; for the rest of us, it can seem absolutely hopeless.
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